Would you find this story interesting?

I am wondering why you hit the snooze on, after you slid out of bed. If I were reading this book I would skip over the Mythical stuff and get back to the story line. I don't mean to sound silly, but I do that a lot when I read. I skip the parts like that. If a book has a long description of the country side or a cabin in the woods, I skip that part and just forward to the story line. It doesn't mean I don't read the book, just skip a lot of the details like that. Now if this is going to be a vampire story, I would throw the book out. That doesn't interest me, but I guess your target audience is teenagers, so it would work for them. Keep going, but either change the line about hitting the snooze on and then slipping out of bed, or loose that line completely. Keep going, it will be interesting to see more about her relationship with her dad.